Tuesday, June 22, 2010

Incomplete.

That day her silence spoke more than she could have.My vision got blurred because of the salty layer of water which almost filled my eyes..waiting to roll down my cheeks as i waited for her to speak.I held her cold palm as she looked eagerly into my eyes as if she wanted to hear something..but the thoughts inside my heart failed to surface as words that day.I dint know what to say for the first time in my entire life..for the first time i could hear silence speak.
It was around 5:30 in the evening..the moon somehow was waiting for the sun to set that day..the sun desperate to stay and shine but the laws of nature forcing it to go against its will.The sky was almost beautiful..it had almost all the colours one could imagine but there was something depressing about the sky that day.It seemed doomed somehow.The birds chirping in loud..rather annoying voices from distant places as if crying over some beloveds unexpected death or frustrated after all days tireless efforts and yet getting nothing to eat.We could hear the evening prayers offered by the muslims in the far away mosque.The voices were melodious yet painful..the wordings appeared meaningful but could hardly be comprehended.The sounds seemed to fade away slowly.The breeze was pleasant..it gave me a feeling as if it wants the world to sleep today..it was intoxicating..but there was something that kept me wide awake..or rather lamently astonished.I had just heard something which i would have never wanted to hear at least from the person i heard it from.


Hey guys , I need your suggestions to complete this story. :)
What could she have said ? :)
I would be really thankful if you post your suggestions as comments. :)
Thankyou. :)

PS:I have thought of a couple of things but I really want something different. :)